Picture Perfect Blue - Comments

  • writhing

    writhing (100)

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    Bee, I still love the way you write. I've always been a fan of the stream of consciousness style that you implement into most of your stories. The protagonist's shyness is very believable (and definitely relatable because who doesn't get awkward around cute boys?), and I feel like I have a direct link into her mind through the narration. I also love the simplicity of the events -- Nikki and Park's first interaction was so sweet and cute and romantic that I was feeling a little giddy after reading it.

    This story is definitely a keeper! I'm subscribing. Dance
    August 27th, 2015 at 03:44am
  • warmaiden

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    oh my goodness, it's so simple yet so sweet. i literally can't with this especially since you hit my character spot on. because i totally would be slightly judgmental about things like that (+ can't make eye contact to save my life HA, you totally got me on point bae) but seriously, this chapter o.e i can't
    March 2nd, 2015 at 03:14am
  • warmaiden

    warmaiden (6085)

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    omfg i'm so excited for this eek!
    January 5th, 2015 at 06:48am