Leader of the Broken Hearts - Comments

Lou as a medical student. That means he's gonna be a doctor. Louis in a doctor coat. I'm dead now. Bye.

Liam has a daughter. Liam as a daddy. Again, I'm dead. You're putting too much dead-worthy mental images in my head, love.

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As I focused in on him, I saw him ignoring the books, papers, and laptop in front of him, his research open on a word document but his eyes elsewhere.

This is totally me when I try to procrastinate from studying or doing assignments. But I know what that grin is for, Lou. You're texting with Aria, aren't you. Even though I don't agree with you and Aria because you both go behind Harry's back and going to hurt him at some point, I do advice the both of you to take things seriously and JUST TELL HARRY!!!

Do you have any idea how emotional both of you made me right now?

Reese has a boyfriend. Potential problem right here because she's in love with Harry. And when Harry gets his heart broken by Aria, she'll be there to comfort him and things will happen and the Reese will be the one cheating with her boyfriend. Ah! This is an endless loop! Why can't people just communicate normally? *pulls hair in frustration*

Max, you don't even open the door for your girlfriend? And you let her cover herself with a jacket instead of waiting for in front of the door with the umbrella you're holding? What kind of a boyfriend are you, seriously?

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“There’s someone else.”

WHAT?!! WHAT??!! WHAT???!!!! MAX YOU DOUCHE!! *punches Max in the face* (yes, Lina is violent at times)Dang! So my whole theory up there can go down the drain. Harry will be the one comforting broken Reese and Harry will be the one cheating on Aria who cheats on him. This story is full of drama.

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“Fucking fine! I know you’ve been fuckin’ Harry the whole time, don’t think I’m stupid!”

You... you!! Don't make me go over there and run you over with you stupid car, you jerkface. You hurt her and you have the guts to put this all on her? Fuck you, dude!

Awww... Harry. You. Are. Amazing. You. Are. The. Sweetest. Thing. Ever. Existed. I. Love. You.

Pfttt... no, Harry, Aria isn't at home. She's at Louis' place, fucking cheating on you. Louis... how can you... how can...? *my heart is hurting, really hurting*

See, Max, Harry comes to her with a fucking umbrella in the pouring rain. That right there is a true gentleman, you dope! AND HE OPENED THE DOOR FOR HER!!!!

It's just small details but I love how you show the comparison between Max and Harry.

They're going back to Louis'. Uh-oh... is Aria still there? Or, if she's there at all?

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“I will always be here for you.”

*stabs my own heart*

Oh... is Louis over at Aria's? That means, Harry and Reese will be alone.

Harry, you'll be the death of me, seriously.

This story is amazing. If you can't tell, I'm definitely hooked already oh my god!

I haven't had the time to read the 2nd chapter and now the third chapter has been updated as well! I like this. More fore me to read.

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"Not really. That relationship lost it's spark months ago. I just haven't had the heart to tell him," I said with a genuine tone. It was true. How could you break Harry's heart? He was the perfect boyfriend that brought me flowers and was the kind I could talk to about anything but it lacked something that I never could put my finger on. Whatever it was, Louis had and I knew it was true with the words that came out of his mouth.

This whole paragraph. I'd always been a firm believer in "the bitter truth is better than sugarcoated lies". If you're not happy with the relationship, get away from it before it goes deeper and more complicated, Aria. Dang! And now someone else comes along and no matter what the reason, I don't like a cheater.

Ah! My feelings! (And this is just the second chapter)

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When I got there, she was at work and the door was opened by a shirtless, toned Louis.

I want a shirtless, toned Louis to open the door for me, please.

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"You know how I've been feeling about my relationship with Harry and I know sleeping with someone else was wrong but it felt right,"

That excuse. Just because it 'felt right' doesn't mean it's right. Dang! You know how betrayed Harry would feel if he ever found out? Aria! How can you do that? Even though you'd lost the spark with him (I honestly don't know how you can lose it though, I mean it's Harry. But if faced with Louis, I'd be losing my mind too. ), that doesn't justify you FREAKING CHEATING ON HIM!

Awww... Niall. That name. My Mistress I love it!

I love this chapter! Gonna read the third chapter now.

so I know this is our story but I just wanna comment because you just wrote your first Aria chapter, but more amazingly, you just wrote in first person for the FIRST time omgggg!!! That's AMAZING. Like, the chapter was freaking fantastic and I loved it and oh my god and sdfga;dkga;h, so... so... yeah.

Just, the fact that you did that, is just... -dies- I love Aria and her confidence and her personality just fascinates me. I love her relationship with Niall, the fact that they are so completely open with each other and can just be best friends/roomies and watch Nicholas Sparks movies. it's all so wonderful.

lol anyway I loved your chapter, dear! and aaghhh your author's note ^.^ <--- I'm learning smilies! lol. thank you so much dear I adore you! :D I am so excited to write my chapter o_o

This is beautiful. The layout is beautiful. The summary is very enticing. The characters page makes me want to read the story even more. I might be a little bit in love already.

Harry you dope! How can you forget the kiss?

Aria is so eyeing Louis.

Oh! I love this already! Reese sounds like a really sweet girl. It must've hurt so much to have to keep her feelings to herself. Falling for your best friend is the worst thing that could happen, especially if they don't feel the same way.

I can't wait to see where you guys take this story. This is amazing!