Addicted to Corruption - Comments

@ RavenArtist93
Glad you like and stuck it through the incest much appreciation. I'm working on another update and story. I will be updating both this week though.

Chapter 9, 10, 11, 12, and 13

Oh no! Jack you sneaky bastard ruining all the fun. You blackmailing son-of-a-bitch lol. I wonder what Jack has to offer...or need...?

And of course he wanted leverage. Honestly, I would be very surprised and crazily shocked as well if I saw that entire sight of those girls and Ryan going at it like no tomorrow. Especially if I knew them personally xD I still absolutely love how you do the different point-of-views to the certain situations. Makes it very much interesting :)

The drama is increasing and damn, this entire "mess" is certainly screwing up with each of the characters. Jack seems totally dumbfounded by what just happened that screwed up the "plan" with Liz and the others. And they were certainly right about this being more complicated than they ever thought. Anything involving sex in a large group of people can always lead to issues LOL

Poor Raina. She feels so trapped by all of this, especially since it is now obvious that Jack knows about the entire "scandal" going on here. And when I least expect it, the two go at it in the kitchen. Talk about a delicious entree Lol (sorry I had to). That was certainly a very steamy scene that was nicely detailed and visible in my mind. Well done, my friend ;D

I love how Jack did not even hesitate twice in joining in on the little orgy before him Lol. That made me chuckle a bit but then again, at least he can maybe shut his trap for a bit since he got laid. Then again, who knows. I bet there is more drama to follow. Very sexy scene though, as usual :P

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I am now all caught up!
Loving this story so far and thank you for the comment of appreciation! C:

@ RavenArtist93
I love when you comment, and I try not to update until you've read it all, but your comments are just that special that I feel the need to update. I'm glad you enjoy it and can look past the fact that it includes incest. In officially dedicating this to you.

Chapter 6, 7, & 8

That entire scene Raina and Liz teasing Mack was actually funny and yet weirdly hot at the same time. I love how you described it and made it seem "enjoyable" to him lol.

That shower scene was incredibly sexy, I have to honestly say. Just how it was described on how the two girls liked it and how Ryan came into the picture was just...steamy as shit. You did very well there, my friend :P

I love the different perspectives you placed on that shower scene to really get an ideal insight on how each of the characters reacted. Liz seems so like...confused about it all and yet, excited by the fact that the pleasure and fun of it is getting to her head. I have a feeling she is in a world of trouble lol.

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Can't wait to read more soon! :)

Chapter 3, 4, & 5:

Raina (I believe that was her) seems to be a major damn tease in the 3rd chapter. Zack almost seems petrified at what she was doing but that was just how I viewed it Lol.

I have to admit, the kissing scene in the 4th chapter with the two girls was pretty hot on how you worded it. Poor Zack was tortured to no end LOL that made me laugh.

And how Jack was so interested in the 5th chapter and pretty much got turned down was funny as heck. I am very curious to see what other crazy events happen next in the upcoming chapters ;P

Chapter 1 & 2:

So far, this is getting very interesting.
The sexiness is coming up for sure lol
I may not be the biggest for incest and all but this story would definitely be intriguing to read from and I look forward to observing more from it.
I should be able to comment the rest of it later today or the next day. :)
So far, I like it! :D

Incest, blackmail, and debauchery...oh my! There's so much going on. It's very interesting. Just keep working

@ Mrs.JamesMaslow
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@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
Y not?

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