Room 303 - Comments

I liked this story :) it ended kind of sad, but I'm glad that phoebe did the right thing and put an end to Mage's bullcrap. It was a nice twist for Mage to be married with kids, you threw me in for a loop there and I liked that. I think you should do a sequel!

Alrighty. I liked the idea for this story. The taboo teacher/student relationship.is always fun to read because of the suspense the relationship brings. I liked even more that Mage turned on her in the end; I actually thought he loved her.

All of that being said, I must advise you going back through each chapter and editing the small grammatical and punctuation errors. Some of the typos made a few sentences hard to read and understand.

I would also have liked to see more of how Phoebe felt about the betrayal because one chapter she was madly in love and the next she's out for blood. It would've been nice to hear the inner turmoil she felt and her thought process before going to find the wife.