Hail Mary of Love - Comments

thanks @ Divine Faery

@ Ed_BeckhamJR
One of two ways you can either go to the story page and pick out a layout someone else has already made or go to my Mibba (your Mibba) click stories and click layouts to make your own then edit your story to add the layout.

Or a third option make a blog asking someone to make you a story layout then when they make it just go to the story stories page and go to the layouts to put it on your story.

@ Divine Faery
how do you do layouts

OK first the story was nice, the theme was cute and I don't mean that in an insulting way I just find stories like this to be nice.

First I think I should warn you that there is nothing wrong with short chapters actually most people enjoy them on this site including me but the story at least to me does seem rushed.

There are also a lot of capitalization problems and a few typos but I think you can catch them if you read over your story again most lowercase i where there should be an I, if you're worried that you missed any after you go over it just as me and I'll show you what I found.

Also having a layout never hurts it puts people more in the mood for the story and helps them enjoy it more.