Tear out All Your Tenderness - Comments

Okay, wow, I really love the way you write. You give the reader such a vivid imagery of everything taking place. I was especially taken with the words you used when describing Logan. I felt immediately drawn to his character.

I was really intrigued by the whole idea of The Hunt. It sounds quite terrifying, honestly, but it also sounds like something I'd love to hear more about. I'm also excited to see what happens with Evelyn. She seems like a strong character, and the fact that she took her sister's place really reinforced that fact for me.

I can't wait to see what else you have planned! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update.

The first thing I'd like to point out is that you're not really allowed to have links within chapters. I'm not a story editor or anything, but I'd hate for you to get in trouble!

I love the vocabulary you use, especially when describing Logan. ...champagne blonde hair and alabaster skin... has got to be my favorite line so far; it just reads so smoothly. It's so easy to fall into a rut of using the same words over and over, especially during character descriptions. I'm certainly guilty of this. So I really liked the words you chose! And I love Logan's vocabulary, too. He speaks so eloquently.

Everything Dalliance said!! I know Logans just selfish but I can't stop myself from REALLY liking him!!!! I love this story and I cant wait to see any new characters you might have up your sleeve! :D

I've so been waiting for this update and I almost squealed in delight when I saw this finally was! I know Logan is a total ass but I can't help but still love him and his possessive and selfish ways.

I really don't think I can possibly love this story more than I do now, but I bet once I read the next chapter, I will. I so can't wait for the Hunt to take place and see how that turns out.

The new layout is beautiful by the way.

I just read the first chapter today and it's AWESOME I love the character pictures and the whole feel of the story and characters (especially logan) I sincerely hope it lasts more than four chapters <3 Plus the fact that it's based off of Howl is really cool! It's such a dark and magical song I can't wait to see what you do with it <3 <3 :)

Wow, this story I so amazing already! I love it! Please update soon!

Wow, this story I so amazing already! I love it! Please update soon!

So excited for more! I love the whole mythical theme in this story and Monsters in Your Bed. I also have to admit that I already love Logan no matter how obsessive he is. I hope Evelyn survives the hunt. Can't wait to see what direction you take this story in!

YES YES YES! I'm so happy you decided to write this. Are you telling me no one has volunteered to take the place of another sister?!! Glad to know the love runs steady and strong in the Grymes family. jk.

Holy crap, that is one big freakin' tree.

But anyway, I would love to see Evelyn survive the hunt and what happens as a result of that. I can't imagine the wolves being happy if that was the case.

Also I secretly love Logan too even though I kinda shouldn't. I agree about him being bad and weirdly possessive but when he speaks and acts, sigh. But if someone else comes along, that's also dreamy..... I might hop on that ship instead. lol.

Aww, only four chapters, I might need more than that!

Can't wait to see what becomes of Evelyn & this story! Till next fangirling time. bye (;