Say You Don’t Want It - Comments

  • TwiHardPotterFan

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    love the scene you wrote between Elijah and Ronaldo. Very nice
    July 19th, 2015 at 07:18am
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    very sweet chapter well done
    July 19th, 2015 at 07:14am
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    a cliff hanger! thank goodness i found this story when it was done so i dont have to wait
    July 19th, 2015 at 07:09am
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    had to lol at the last line of the chapter
    July 19th, 2015 at 07:06am
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    ooo busted by his mom! how embarassing
    July 19th, 2015 at 07:00am
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    i am having the worst night but am trying to calm down by reading more. Great job with chapter 8
    July 19th, 2015 at 06:56am
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    what a perfect first date!
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:49am
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    im sighing over cristiano's sweetness
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:44am
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    chapter five has be very very curious!
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:41am
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    lmao he is desperate that he wants a background check? oh poor Ronaldo
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:38am
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    chapter three was great! the joking between the guys were very cutely written
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:36am
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    woohoo finished chapter two and for what it's worth, Ronaldo is my type. Just saying. Also, i am guessing this is the first story to the one I started yesterday?
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:33am
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    woohoo finished chapter two and for what it's worth, Ronaldo is my type. Just saying. Also, i am guessing this is the first story to the one I started yesterday?
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:33am
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    I just read chapter one. Very good start to the story jumping right in there
    July 19th, 2015 at 03:29am
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    This was a wonderful story, it only took me two days to read it, since I was hooked on the edge of my seat. You did a wonderful job, better than what I can put together, but you know, that's just me. I can't wait to read the Sequel ^^
    May 1st, 2015 at 12:39am
  • FootieJo

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    Great story. Hope they can make it.
    April 18th, 2015 at 06:39pm
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    Great chapter... glad Cristiano isn't gonna hold her back
    April 18th, 2015 at 03:24pm
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    I can't shake the feeling that this is going to end in tears
    April 17th, 2015 at 10:09pm
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    Not the proposal I had imagined but it was actually kind of sweet. He let her make the job decision without putting pressure on her to marry him. Hope they work out. Junior will be happy.
    April 17th, 2015 at 09:27pm
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    Oh no... That's it for the proposal then. If he asks her now, she'll take the job thinking he's trying to trap her into staying and then they'll be over Sad
    April 17th, 2015 at 07:06pm