Hope - Comments

Loved the update

I agree with the guys and Zack's family. He's a little to trusting of Kristel
Something about her story doesn't sit right. I think there's more she isn't saying
I'm wondering when she's going to realize just how famous Zacky is
When is her past going to catch up to her?
No doubt Gena will be making herself known again. There's no way we've seen the last of her yet

Loved it hun xxx

I hope Kristel and Zacky get together soon.

Please update again soon. Xxx

I love this story. I totally binged all the chapter so I am all caught up. Can't wait for more!

Loved the update. Loved how Val scolded Matt but he has a point.

I really enjoyed the Matt part. It shows he cares about Kristel's wellbeing if nothing else. Please update again soon. Xxx

OMG I love this story so much. I'm glad she opened up to Zack and your husband is right - it is about time they kissed!! Please update again soon. Xxx

Love love love this! Please update soon!!

She has two id's? What is she hiding?

Great new chapter!!

Loved the update

I was happy when I saw that this was updated. It was a good little chapter. Glad she's coming out of her shell a little more. Lol, I want to say Indiana (though I know that's not it). I live in Indy. I'm from Cali, but we moved here when I was little. I hate winter. I also want to guess Nebraska just because it kinda rhymes with Alaska, but I'm not even sure if they get snow. I feel like they do, but wasn't sure.

@ NikkiFoxy8
I saw this comment a couple days ago, but I wasn't sure when I was going to get a chapter up. But I just wanted to let you know it should be this coming week. At the latest Wednesday. :) Thanks for sticking with me in between the updates, it means a lot to me.

@ NikkiFoxy8
I saw this comment a couple days ago, but I wasn't sure when I was going to get a chapter up. But I just wanted to let you know it should be this coming week. At the latest Wednesday. :) Thanks for sticking with me in between the updates, it means a lot to me.

Please update soon! I really want them all to give Kristel a chance to explain everything and understand that she is not lying to them! They really need to trust her and understand her situation! They need to know that Kristel really needs their help and Kristel and Zacky need each other and they need to talk! I really love this story! Please update soon!

They don't trust her now? I wish her and Zacky would talk some more and get things cleared up

@ mrsmshadz
I'll admit, I'm not doing a good job at having Kristel and Zacky talk, especially about Kristels past (several reasons why). I was trying to do something where they're just more interested in learning about each other, and eventually get romantically involved a bit later (also for reasons). As you can tell, I'm struggling a little in that area, and am kinda throwing them into a love at first sight kinda thing.

In the next couple chapters they will be getting to know each other a little more, and I'll also go back through the previous chapters and see if anything needs tweaked. Thanks for pointing that part out to me, and I hope you read the next chapter when it gets posted.

So I started this story and wonder how Zaky could like her if he knows nothing about her. They didn't even talk all that much.

love your story very addicting keep up the good work!

Great story cant wait to read more