oh man, you kidding, she dropped that comment to Johanna? got a feeling she'll regret that either in the training centre OR sometime in the arena.. like that cashmere was by her side when brutus came by though and hell yeah she's jealous that finnick whispered something to katniss hahah
meh filler or not, don't care, I still loved reading it and after almost pulling my own hair out earlier today when I was working on a drawing of finnick (if you've seen the posters for part2 where he's got the mockingjay painted on his face then you know which one i'm struggling with) it's really nice to have this to read
why oh why did finnick have to bring THAT up on the train?? like the two of them doesn't have enough things on their minds........ BUT then again, maybe it's good that she's aware that it could very well happen....... and then the fact that they should keep the two of them a secret....
I'm glad this is back and going again. :D I agree with Noblesse, it's great that she's more confident here. I'm always shit at remembering originals and how their rewrites differ, but she doesn't seem to be so paralyzingly traumatized in this version (although still realistically traumatized). Looking forward to your next chapter!
idk how i haven't seen this new version until now???? but i'm glad I've found it and I really like how you focused more on Elenia's life before the Quell and how much more confident she seems in this version!
hah aawe elenias nieces are so smitten by finnick and it's adorable! ooh gosh, the ''reaping'' is under-way....... got a feelin' that emotions will start to flow real bad soon...
maybe shorter than the others but when it ends in such a sweet way, who cares how short or long a chapter is?? for once she actually managed to not mess it up and I just adore those two together
ah man!! confused as to who started the kiss so she took off... had that awkward convo with her brother- that now has that tat on his arm.. smart thom and then they kiss again and she totally messes it up again.. gaah! elenia is driving me nuts..
aawe I really do hope that he snuggled up to elenia- knowing that it was her and not someone else next to him in bed ooh he told her about the plan to keep katniss alive.. and they've started training- she really needs it- since she's been lacking in that area since her games..
oh man this kinda made me want to smack rita.. that was a little bit harsh.. sure she's pissed off and all that but to lash out at her like that- saying those things about her brother.. wow.. and finnick.. aawee breaks my heart when he cries...
i get all giddy everytime i see that this has been updated