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  • LittlexPrincess

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    more need more
    May 17th, 2019 at 07:35pm
  • HotRanger69

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    thank you for continuing to write. i love this story <3
    April 2nd, 2017 at 12:13pm
  • purple17

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    Love, love, love your story! Please keep going! Very Happy
    October 28th, 2016 at 06:57am
  • LittlexPrincess

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    So I read the first version of this, did you change anything or just editing it?
    December 31st, 2015 at 07:48pm
  • Noblesse

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    ELENIA N O
    Johanna's gonna kick her ass, I can already see it omg
    December 30th, 2015 at 11:40pm
  • helena_88

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    oh man, you kidding, she dropped that comment to Johanna? got a feeling she'll regret that either in the training centre OR sometime in the arena..
    like that cashmere was by her side when brutus came by though XD
    and hell yeah she's jealous that finnick whispered something to katniss Cute hahah
    December 29th, 2015 at 02:44pm
  • Noblesse

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    “Devastatingly so.”
    *melts* Arms
    August 27th, 2015 at 02:38am
  • helena_88

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    meh filler or not, don't care, I still loved reading it tehe
    and after almost pulling my own hair out earlier today when I was working on a drawing of finnick (if you've seen the posters for part2 where he's got the mockingjay painted on his face then you know which one i'm struggling with) it's really nice to have this to read Cute
    August 26th, 2015 at 04:17pm
  • Noblesse

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    way to go, Finnick! ofc you had to bring that up No
    August 24th, 2015 at 11:19pm
  • helena_88

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    why oh why did finnick have to bring THAT up on the train?? Sad like the two of them doesn't have enough things on their minds........ BUT then again, maybe it's good that she's aware that it could very well happen.......
    and then the fact that they should keep the two of them a secret....
    August 24th, 2015 at 05:37pm
  • Death_to_Roses

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    I'm glad this is back and going again. :D
    I agree with Noblesse, it's great that she's more confident here. I'm always shit at remembering originals and how their rewrites differ, but she doesn't seem to be so paralyzingly traumatized in this version (although still realistically traumatized).
    Looking forward to your next chapter!
    August 20th, 2015 at 11:10am
  • Noblesse

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    idk how i haven't seen this new version until now???? but i'm glad I've found it and I really like how you focused more on Elenia's life before the Quell and how much more confident she seems in this version!
    August 19th, 2015 at 09:44pm
  • bubbles103157

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    You rock! I adore this story
    August 19th, 2015 at 09:18pm
  • helena_88

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    hah aawe elenias nieces are so smitten by finnick and it's adorable! Cute
    ooh gosh, the ''reaping'' is under-way....... Sad
    got a feelin' that emotions will start to flow real bad soon... Shocked
    August 19th, 2015 at 08:07pm
  • helena_88

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    maybe shorter than the others but when it ends in such a sweet way, who cares how short or long a chapter is?? Cute
    for once she actually managed to not mess it up XD and I just adore those two together Cute
    August 18th, 2015 at 08:46pm
  • helena_88

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    ah man!! confused as to who started the kiss so she took off... had that awkward convo with her brother- that now has that tat on his arm.. smart thom XD
    and then they kiss again and she totally messes it up again.. gaah! XD elenia is driving me nuts.. Cute
    June 19th, 2015 at 12:03am
  • helena_88

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    OH MY GOSH THEY KISSED!! WAY TO END IT THERE DUDE!! ahahah... if you twist that kiss into a dream or somethin' i'm gonna go nuts XD heheh
    June 10th, 2015 at 09:29pm
  • bubbles103157

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    I adored the original so I'm super excited to read this! I reallllly hope you don't let finnick die like in the books. It would be heartbreaking.
    June 4th, 2015 at 08:40am
  • helena_88

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    aawe I really do hope that he snuggled up to elenia- knowing that it was her and not someone else next to him in bed Cute
    ooh he told her about the plan to keep katniss alive.. and they've started training- she really needs it- since she's been lacking in that area since her games.. XD
    May 29th, 2015 at 09:46pm
  • helena_88

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    oh man this kinda made me want to smack rita.. that was a little bit harsh.. sure she's pissed off and all that but to lash out at her like that- saying those things about her brother.. wow..
    and finnick.. aawee breaks my heart when he cries...

    i get all giddy everytime i see that this has been updated XD
    May 28th, 2015 at 09:14pm