Don't Stand so Close to Me - Comments

  • amanduh

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    @ Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch
    Thank you for commenting! As for chapter 1, not gonna spoil much, but she's definitely pushing his buttons, that's for sure. And he does like it to some extent... Chapter 2, he does have tests in P.E for his students.

    And yeah, she's trouble alright ;-)
    May 22nd, 2015 at 10:38pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    [b[Chapter 1
    Okay so I really like the concept you have here with chapter one we get to see how Matt runs his P.E class.

    But I feel like he's already done something bad with this girl I mean why else have rumors started or has he done something with a student before Olivia and why is Anna glaring, does she have a thing for Matt Mr. Sanders? ((I am making this judgment with out beingd one with Chapter 2))

    Why is Olivia rubbing his neck and making it look like something is going on when it isn't or is it? Is she just flirting or trying to just push his buttons what made her like she is?

    Chapter 2

    He had been grading tests his freshman students had taken for the past two hours Why is he grading papers if he is a P.E teacher does he do some other teaching or does he give them test in P.E?

    I like all of her little inuindos she keeps throwing at him, I feel like this girl is trouble or that they some how have done something you've yet to reveal and I'm really intrested to see why the school has these rumors and why Matt seems to think things that he maybe shouldn't really think.

    I think this story has a really good start, and I'm really curious as to where you're go to take it and what all you're going to reveal or just how its going to go forward I always find these stories so intresting and things.

    Much <3 Kat
    May 19th, 2015 at 08:08am