OH GOD ALIENS. IS IT ALIENS. I BET IT’S ALIENS. I’VE NEVER READ AN ALIEN STORY BEFORE. I’M SO PUMPED ABOUT TEH ALIENS.
In the second chapter when the mom asks where Lila has been there’s a 3 mixed in with tears. Might want to fix that. So like, I get that the people abducted don’t realize they’ve been gone but I really don’t feel that confusion that they should be feeling at something like happening one moment and then suddenly changing. Like the brother’s reaction at seeingg Sam was so so blasé it didn’t make any sense. I personally think Sam attacking him and his brother just being so distraught with emotion that his brother was back would make more sense then whoa you need to understand you’ve been missing for six months. Like he’s immediately defending his actions rather than being like my brother is back where have you been. He automatically seems to know that his brother doesn’t know he’s been missing.
Lila’s was a bit more what I would’ve expected but still I didn’t feel that disconnect that would be expected from your life changing so rapidly.