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  • PizzaPals5638

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    I'm 100% for this! I'm so hooked
    October 8th, 2017 at 08:39am
  • KeepCallin'MeHome

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    Not my usual type of story, but I'm hooked. I need to know what happened and how the two are connected! It definitely keeps me wanting to hang around.
    August 30th, 2016 at 05:04am
  • GGGG.

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    This doesn't feel rushed at all. Your timing is perfect and helps set up whatever is going to come!
    August 29th, 2016 at 05:26pm
  • Unown

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    Fantastic story! I don't feel that this is rushed, I actually feel that it flows very steadily which is something I was very impressed with. I love the idea and the hints.

    I look forward to what follows!
    August 28th, 2016 at 02:32pm
  • GGGG.

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    Finally, a story on Mibba that I want to read!!
    August 26th, 2016 at 12:17am
  • Death_to_Roses

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    I have also never read an alien story before and I'm super exciiiiited!
    August 21st, 2016 at 10:10am
  • silk tea.

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    OH GOD ALIENS. IS IT ALIENS. I BET IT’S ALIENS. I’VE NEVER READ AN ALIEN STORY BEFORE. I’M SO PUMPED ABOUT TEH ALIENS.

    In the second chapter when the mom asks where Lila has been there’s a 3 mixed in with tears. Might want to fix that. So like, I get that the people abducted don’t realize they’ve been gone but I really don’t feel that confusion that they should be feeling at something like happening one moment and then suddenly changing. Like the brother’s reaction at seeingg Sam was so so blasé it didn’t make any sense. I personally think Sam attacking him and his brother just being so distraught with emotion that his brother was back would make more sense then whoa you need to understand you’ve been missing for six months. Like he’s immediately defending his actions rather than being like my brother is back where have you been. He automatically seems to know that his brother doesn’t know he’s been missing.

    Lila’s was a bit more what I would’ve expected but still I didn’t feel that disconnect that would be expected from your life changing so rapidly.

    But also, Naomi you suck. Like damn. What a tit.

    I am subscribing for sure tho because ALIENS.
    January 10th, 2016 at 03:39am