March 29th, 2018 at 02:10am
@ Midna the Dark
Thank you for your feedback and thank you for pointing out those two mistakes I missed. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I worked really hard on it though, to be honest with you I don't think I'm very good at first person but I thought I'd try, I'll try to get the next chapter out soon.
Anytime! And I think you are doing a pretty good job in first POV. Keep practicing and I know you'll only improve! Can't wait to ead more!