January 20th, 2016 at 09:52pm
First of all, I kind of had mixed feelings about the layout. I liked the colour in the back and then the font of the title, it looks super appealing and lovely. But I had to zoom in quite a bit to be able to see the text. I don't know if it was just actually really small size, or if my eyes were bad haha.
I really love how the chapters sort of unfold. There's so much imagery and then there's also little snippets of himself that he gives off every once in a while which I feel is a really good mix. The paragraphs I feel, are really quite raw and passionate in the way they've been written. I seriously enjoyed particular lines in there. "A painter is merely someone who observes. Yet I have experienced her." That's a fantastic line.
I'm really, really interested in the whole concept of this. I've never read anything like it and I think you did it quite wonderfully!
The font is a rather small size, yet on my laptop its easily readable. Though I do know it isn't the same on different screens. I will look into it to make it slightly bigger, for the nearsighted ;P.
Thank you so much for the kind words and I am so flattered when you say its original. I find it hard to find original concepts but that comment of yours means the world to us!