D.O.A (And Then Some) - Comments

  • Don'tFearTheReaper

    Don'tFearTheReaper (100)

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    @ tommo;
    You always make my days with your asdfghjkl-ing. I love you so much. I'm very happy you got the theme of the puppy, describing his actions (my classmates thought he was an actual dog, and the dog was her husband Facepalm) I took the men playing with fireworks from my real life; I had an uncle who always wanted to play with fireworks, haha.

    Please, if you fall off your chair, protect your head and neck. I love you and your comments, and you, and thank you so much. I hope you have a better evening than falling off your chair.
    May 22nd, 2015 at 01:54am
  • saegusa.

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    The whole first paragraph is so wonderfully wonderful at setting up Darwin and just his self. He probably comes across as annoying to everyone, but geez, my heart just expanded from it (maybe because I have a friend just like this. oh, Sara) and I love it.

    "She’s thinking that we should let the men play with fireworks this year." This sounds almost exactly like this woman down the street. Oh my goodness. Kind've a random thing to mention in the comment, but it stuck out and I don't know why but here we are.

    “Dar-win, here boy,” and it's keeping in line with the puppy theme and it's so cute and it's just so great ad he responds to it like he's used to it, it just rolls right off his back and it's agh.

    “Nah, don’t pay attention to that.” He covered my wrist, like that would make me forget the time. OMGYES OMGYES OMGYES

    "But don’t worry, he still had enough energy to talk my ear off." I REALLY LOVE DARWIN AND I REALLY AM LOVING SAHARA TOO (and I've always liked that name; when I was, like, ten, that was the name of the main character of some story I have since destroyed. thankfully) AND I AM REALLY LOVING THEM AS A UNIT AND OHMYGOSH. In Love In Love In Love

    darwin is so cute and i can see perfectly well how he can be hella annoying but i'm just finding it all endearing In Love

    WE COULD CLIMB A MOUNTAIN OH GOD SOMEONE CHAIN THIS BOY UP STOP HIM.

    musical chairs. how annoyingly adorable is this pls hlp.

    WHAT THE.

    WHAT THE FUUUUU FELIX HOW COULD YOU JUST END THE CHAPTER LIKE THIS.

    HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS I AM OFFENDED AND WOUNDED. WHAT. WH TA WHA WHAT IS THIS. *heavy breathing* Swoon FHBEUSIOHNGISERGYUSEIHBG WHY.

    i'm sososo excited for more, i am on the edge of this dining room chair i am about to fall off. your writing is absolutely amazing, as it always is, and just. agggggggh.
    May 22nd, 2015 at 12:37am
  • A. J.

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    Hey, love the snippet and the cool layout. I know this is gonna be good!
    April 24th, 2015 at 03:18pm