This is a really great story!! (figured it would be best to lead with that xD) Umm, what to say to make this a better comment than just "good job"? Well... I like the style you've written this in, for one thing. A lot. A lot of stories are first person, but I've rarely read a first person story where there's so much of the narrator's attitude just blatantly present. I laughed as I read the summary and laughed some more when I read the actual story. It was really great, seriously. Good job! I've subscribed and recommended this, and I can't wait to read more! ^-^
May 18th, 2015 at 04:11am