Sexy Drug - Comments

  • PoeticMess.

    PoeticMess. (150)

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    I am. :) I've noticed a couple of grammatical things that I missed last time, but nothing major. I haven't read all of what you've posted yet (been busy with a giveaway and reviews and such), but just having more RR fanfiction on the site makes me suuuper excited.

    My reaction as I start reading: BUT BOOO LUCKY DRUGS NO RONNIE IS CLEAN BOO. RONNIE NO PLEEEEEEEEEEASE [/rant]

    I don't know if I can handle reading about him relapsing. He's been so strong about not even going near the stuff in real life and he caved so easily in this! I hope that doesn't become a reoccurring incidence with him, because ugh just noooo Facepalm I wish there would've been a little more build up, since you needed that in there for the story. More of a struggle, so he didn't come across so weak. I don't know. That just hits me real hard. Especially since it's Ronnie. My babe.

    #TeamByeLucky
    ^^^ my reaction at the end of chapter five. Hopefully he meets a girl who's his only drug. (; (see what I did there!)
    June 14th, 2015 at 03:11am
  • chaosofthedead

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    @ PoeticMess.
    Thanks so much on your comments! I really appreciate it. This is really a work in progress and I hope it goes great. :) I hope you're enjoying it so far.
    June 14th, 2015 at 03:02am
  • PoeticMess.

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    I always get so excited when I see new FIR fiction come to the site! I'm excited to read this and see where this goes! I just wanted to comment first and say that I'm excited for your story. :)

    From what I can tell from the little bit I read, you've got a pretty strong story going and the grammar seems pretty flawless. You might want to be careful of putting white words on a black background. That makes it a little hard to read. Might want to invert them to make it easier on your readers! Feel free to ignore me though, it's just a suggestion. :)
    June 13th, 2015 at 10:50am