Butterfly - Comments

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    losing control. (4250)

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    This had so much emotion! I thought, since it was about a butterfly, that this story was going to be cute and sweet but it definitely wasn't. I love when drabbles are so short but leave a really big impact like this.

    The only thing I would say is to just watch your sentences, sometimes they can get a little but long. Not that there's many sentences in a 100 word drabble, but yeah.

    Very nice, I think this is my favourite one that I've read so far!
    June 22nd, 2015 at 10:40am