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  • warmaiden

    warmaiden (6085)

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    wow, this is a very strong piece & very disturbing. i haven't read a drabble like this ever so im very intrigued. the dark theme of this from the time i clicked on the story made me think of anything & everything, but the intensity of this was something i wasn't expecting. such tragedy - like innocence corrupted.
    July 8th, 2015 at 06:57am
  • vaguethoughts

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    Amazing work, it was super intense! It went through the course of a girl being taken advantage of and the retribution she gets in the end. I don’t know why but I also like the dark theme of it, maybe because I’ve barely seen them in the drabbles I’ve read.
    July 7th, 2015 at 04:22pm
  • losing control.

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    This was really cool. I liked how instead of focusing on a single moment, you went through almost a timeline, I guess. It was really interesting to read. There was a nice understated type of emotion in this as well. It was like you could feel how cold the character felt, since I assume she's the one who killed her dad, so she has to be pretty void of emotion to do that. It was laced all in the writing, but wasn't out in the open which I liked.

    Nice job!
    June 22nd, 2015 at 10:45am