Little Death - Comments

uuGH. I HATE HOW MUCH I RELATE TO THIS PIECE. Don't get me wrong, though -- I enjoyed it! And I am such a sucker for fiction written in second person because that shit just eats at you. And that's what your writing did to me. Thank you for sharing this, and I apologize for the lack of constructive criticism. I am mostly a mibba ghost who rarely reads and comments on anything these days, but I felt the need to immerse myself in this story and tell you that you are an honest writer.

This was beautiful. I feel like everyone can relate to this piece, whether it's only a little or entirely.

WOW! This was simply poetic. Your words flow like honey. You are a truly gifted writer.