Mask - Comments

  • silent hearts.

    silent hearts. (1050)

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    I think it's interesting that you talked about how everyone wears masks, but then set the character apart. You still made the point, though, that everyone wears a mask, even if it is only visible to themselves. And it's intriguing how far you describe people taking it; no longer just hiding, but becoming something hiding something else. The only thing I would've liked more is if you had included more of the character's voice.
    June 25th, 2015 at 04:03pm