Too Late - Comments

  • lilynotlyla

    lilynotlyla (100)

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    This was really cute. There were a few things grammatically and situationally that seemed a tiny bit out of place, but overall you did a nice job. :)

    (I also LOVE the theme you used!)
    June 28th, 2015 at 11:21pm
  • polishpearlsparis

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    Loved absolutely everything about this story from the player to the relationship to the heartbreak. I would totally read a multi-chapter fic off this prompt.
    June 20th, 2015 at 01:05am