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Ughhhh! I am legitimately feeling the end of this. I know exactly how she feels about Tokyo because that's EXACTLY how I was when I moved here to where I live now. I hated for the first two years, and now I know I will always call this place home, even if I ever leave.

The end to this is so perfect. Her thoughts really bring the whole theme of this story home, and I love that. Great job!

Haha! I've seen that deleted scene! Cracks me up. :D Love this chapter!

Only a couple more chapters? Aww :(

This was a great chapter!

Loving the new updates. I really like that Earl and Twinkie have got her thinking. And I hope Reiko is okay!

What IS going on with Neela and Takashi?

Nice update!

'You'll never know' haha, I loved that.

And they finally kissed! Wooo!

The chapter title is perfect. Finally they kiss!

I would literally kill my friends if they did that to me. XD

Ah, this chapter is cute. Rain, tickling, tea... *sighs* sounds great. :D

Han is too much of a tease XD I just want to hit him!

Han loves to leave me in suspense.

I loved their joking back and fourth about breakfast, and how Han took his time taking Amelia home.

AND THE MEDICINE IS WORKING! HELL YEAH!!!

but why IS Han so sheepish?

'Wait 'til your birthday and I'll show you shy.' THIS KILLED ME!

Oh my god, Han literally made me blush.

Han's comment about how he'd rather kiss her lips than just a kiss on the cheek about made me squeal like an idiot.

And, like I said, I hope this treatment works. It had better work! I love that it was Han she called, needing to relax. A good long car or motorcycle ride does wonders.

More please i love this already

Ugh that Morimoto is a turd fish. Han should have put his ass in the hospital!

'Could'be sworn his eyes lit up' <-- literally flailed at that.

And Morimoto said that? What a prick! No wonder he wouldn't tell Amelia what was up. I'm glad Han defended her, though. Great chapter!

Annnnnd I'm all caught up and out of chapters to read now. Neela knows something about Han that Amelia doesn't. Like, she knows Han likes her or something. Was that what they were talking about back at the garage before Amelia collapsed?

And I really hope the new treatment works. 'Cause if it doesn't I will probably curl up in a corner and cry.

Han better make his damn move soon!

# Four. from fifteen to nineteen.

I like Morimoto, but it seems he has a bit of an... Attitude problem? Jealousy issue? I don't know but it doesn't settle right. I wonder what he said when he snapped at Han. And what the hell was he on about, criticising how Neela dresses? I'm glad Amelia could keep her cool because I wouldn't have.

Ah, leave it to Han to save the evening. And on a motorcycle at that! Forget the white horse, ride in on a Harley! Or Yamaha, which is what Han's is, I'm assuming. Lmao, sorry. I'm a bit of a motorcycle enthusiast. That's the best part about Summer for me, everyone brings out their bikes. Funny thing is, I've never been on one. I'd be down for a ride with Han anytime, though.

But Amelia's actions are going to have some serious repercussions. I know it.

Ah, shopping trips. Or rather, just a girl's day out, that can fix a lot of things. Or at least will make you feel better.

But Amelia's right, things shouldn't go fine in a relationship, and then not. If she gets the feeling that she should bail out, she probably should. I know Morimoto is probably just reeling from the pressure that's coming down from Takashi and his family, but he shouldn't take it out on Amelia.

And I love, love, LOVE the fact that Neela teases Amelia about Han. Makes me smile! I also like the fact that Neela has only had one boyfriend so she can't really give Amelia much advice. Maybe NEITHER of them really know how a proper relationship goes. But I don't know much about her and Takashi's relationship, but there's something about Takashi that unsettles me.

I also like what you included about Neela's drifting, and how she's not as confident about it as Han is, and how Amelia prefers Han drifting. I loved that part.

Okay, so Morimoto is just purposely asserting dominance over her? So publicly too? What the hell! She's not a damn trophy! And why is Han acting so distant? What, he think things with her and Morimoto are better and he's pissed, or something? I don't know. Men are a pain in the ass.

'Kim suggested I throttle him.' I lost my shit over this line. It reminded me of one of my friends when I had problems with my last relationship. Only I think if was more her that wanted to do the throttling. She was like 'I don't care how much the flight costs, if I have to come kick someone's ass, I'm going to!" I loved that.

Uh oh. Morimoto isn't being patient with her dislike of cars... What's he up to?

Twinkie isn't liking Morimoto's attitude either.

Okay, I'm thinking Han knows something about Morimoto that Amelia doesn't.

Oh no! What's going on with Amelia? Is it her body rejecting the medicine, or something else? God, I hope it's not the medicine.

Gaaaaahh!!!! The way she talks about Han! I love it! And I agree with her mother. Why does Amelia not talk about Morimoto like she does Han?

And Twink does have to make an entrance, doesn't he? I love him. :3

BUT THE TREATMENT STOPPED WORKING! NOOOOO!

And she called for Han over Morimoto!



This story is gonna make me crazy.

Well, crazy-er.

Word bomb three. From chapter seven to fourteen.

Poor Amelia! She's really being put through the wringer right now. I'm so glad her friends are being so supportive. And Twinkie! He was crying! Gah, I just want to give him a hug.

And Han being such a sweet heart there at the end. ::in love: I've said it before, but I love how you describe him.

I can totally relate to getting poked and prodded with needles. I was in the hospital recently for a kidney stone, and the local hospital had such a hard time getting any blood from my and getting an IV going that they pricked me eleven times, and where getting ready to put it in my neck, but I said something not even meaning to which made one of the nurses back up, and she finally got it in my hand using a smaller needle. It's a good thing I don't mind needles and have such a high pain tolerance, but sometimes I can't tell if its a blessing or a curse, haha. I have small and deep veins, so its even worse. I can definitely relate to Amelia there. I had like eight bruises, two of which were almost black. It sucked!

And did Han have Twinkie ask about card games? And what did Morimoto say? So many questions!

Neela, Twinkie and Morimoto are great. I really love them. They remind me of some of my friends.

Yay! Han came to visit her! :D I'm sensing some possible jealousy from Morimoto though. Wonder why? And he brought flowers too, that was sweet of him. :)

Morimoto dressed up for the date? Somehow I should've expected that. And I don't think there's nothing plain about Amelia. I like that he's a bit nervous though. My question is how is he going to pay for everything?

*Flailing* HAN TOOK HER DRIFTING!!!!! HELL YEAH! :D

I wonder what it was that Morimoto and Takashi didn't seem so happy about. Was it that Neela and Amelia were talking to Han?

BUT HAN TOOK HER DRIFTING!!! And she was able to relax! We have progress! :D

What!!! Morimoto has ties to the Yakuza? And Takashi too? I wasn't expecting that. I wonder how Han feels about that. And Neela, does she feel like she owes Takashi? I don't know about that smile Takashi gave Amelia before he left. I'm sure Morimoto didn't purposely hurt her. I can understand somewhat why he'd be upset, but Takashi is the one that told her to go to Han... Wait, Takashi told her. Was he planning for Morimoto to lash out like that?

Okay. My mind is going round in circles now. What is Takashi up to?

This just keeps getting better!