Uranus - Comments

  • warmaiden

    warmaiden (6085)

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    the whole time i was freaking out bc im so in love w/ the planets & the stars & zodiac signs. literally i've become obsessed w/ the beauty of it all & how they all in some way connect. i think it's absolutely breathtaking so for me to read this piece you've written is like stepping into a scenario where a father tells his offspring how gorgeous the universe is & in an enlightening fashion.
    July 6th, 2015 at 07:35am
  • n. josten

    n. josten (1270)

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    I'm in love, I'm in love. I love the personalization of the planets, how they work, how you see them and when you see them, and what it all means. It means so much in 100 words and I almost can't even figure out how you managed that because I feel like I just read 1k words instead with the depth and backstory of all the importance, what all this signifies, why there's this faint resonating feeling of heartbreak and disappointment almost? God, this was just so so so good and beautiful and I've never recommended a drabble so fast in my life.
    July 2nd, 2015 at 08:37am
  • silent hearts.

    silent hearts. (1050)

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    I love how you tied in not only all of the planets, but also that personal connection that invests a reader in your work. The importance of each planet is explored in surprising depth for a drabble, and while Uranus has the shortest description, it is one of the most significant. I feel like there is some very heavy symbology in here that I'm going to go back and read for. This is fantastic just at first read, though!
    June 24th, 2015 at 11:57pm