Erehe - Comments

that summary is so blunt & straightforward, it was destined for me to read through it twice just to feel that energy tbh. raw from dehydration - yeesh, that made me have to grab my bottle for a refill. blistered neck from a rope tied tightly around him...my goodness. even till the end, this man died w/ whatever he believed in & made sure everyone knew. beautiful piece.

that summary is so blunt & straightforward, it was destined for me to read through it twice just to feel that energy tbh. raw from dehydration - yeesh, that made me have to grab my bottle for a refill. blistered neck from a rope tied tightly around him...my goodness. even till the end, this man died w/ whatever he believed in & made sure everyone knew. beautiful piece.

Why are your layouts so simple yet so provoking and fitting all the same? It's like art and this isn't any different. This fell so deep and I can feel it, I see it, but the different language and the situation rattled me. I could almost feel the rope around my throat and I actually had to clear my throat a couple times reading this through (which I did twice, mind you) because it felt constricted and like I was being choked. I felt sad and angry and hopeless, but above all, scared kind of and I wasn't even in the situation. It felt like it, though. I can't believe you managed to provoke so much in so little words, but you did and it was wonderful and beautiful and almost terrifying.