This was sweet and I really like the layout, and the story. I'm not a huge fan of these boys but I really wanted to see things work out for them. I am going to recommend for future reference that you use quotation marks (") instead of apostrophes (') when using dialogue. If you ever doubt your grammar, hit up the forums! There are several threads where people will edit your work for you :) Thank you so much for entering my contest! It was a pleasure.
July 10th, 2015 at 05:20am