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  • Thingtastic

    Thingtastic (360)

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    I love this! And I agree with dawn of light, you need to make this a full story! That last line was awesome!
    January 19th, 2016 at 03:40pm
  • dawn of light

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    You need to make this a full story. I'm begging you.

    I love how this was written in one hundreds words, yet has a million meanings roaming around each line. I kid you not, when I finished reading this, I said, "Holy shit. This was good." I thought it was chilling. You make the readers question what is actually happening with the simple thoughts of our main character. I am really curious and I hope you make this a full story Cute

    I also really liked how the MC described herself a bit. I want to know more about her, really. This was very interesting!
    January 16th, 2016 at 11:21pm