You need to make this a full story. I'm begging you.
I love how this was written in one hundreds words, yet has a million meanings roaming around each line. I kid you not, when I finished reading this, I said, "Holy shit. This was good." I thought it was chilling. You make the readers question what is actually happening with the simple thoughts of our main character. I am really curious and I hope you make this a full story
I also really liked how the MC described herself a bit. I want to know more about her, really. This was very interesting!