AAHHH an update yes!!!
October 26th, 2015 at 03:49am
America's Suitehearts - Comments
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Omg an update! I like the set up for this chapter, and I can't wait for more!October 25th, 2015 at 06:10am
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July 31st, 2015 at 08:18am -
Oh my god i thought you were never going to update. Do you plan on going deeper into what hapoened or leaving it vague? Either way im excited for the next chapter!July 31st, 2015 at 05:21am
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@ folie a deux
I'm glad it worked out! I was happy with how some parts of it turned out, but just wasn't sure about others!July 31st, 2015 at 05:12am -
I really like the overlap between the different times, you wrote it well! the diction was especially good in this chapter, I dunno how to explain it but it just all flows so nicely and keeps me on my edge, waiting to see how the plots forms (even if there are "cliche" aspects, as you said, they still compliment each other!!)July 31st, 2015 at 05:00am
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Woah those two chapters are completely different. I wonder what happened. hope you update soon.July 18th, 2015 at 01:10pm
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omggg blue rabbits lmao...never forget...that was such a weird time.
you've intrigued me now and I'm excited to see how exactly Nora ended up in this situation and how she and Patrick coincidentally ended up at the same place all those years later...July 18th, 2015 at 04:09am -
ooh I like this a lot already! I especially love the line "At 18, he knew little of girls and a lot about putting them on pedestals" because that just seems to describe Patrick in a nutshell. I can't wait to see how this relationship blossoms.July 10th, 2015 at 05:29am
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I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!July 10th, 2015 at 05:06am
