Bone & Marrow - Comments

i just realized my last comment was almost a month ago.

I agree with you every person in zombie movies and books are healthy
it's nice to see something differnt even though i feel bad for Josiah, it's more realistic when some people are sick.
So i'm glad you included that. I also noticed that Kora is much more present lately.
But what about lord sigmund, i know he's sick but he's stil alive right? we haven't heard from him for a while.
Sometimes i'm not even sure who's alive and who isn't.

Aghhhh, I love this so much <3 To be fair, I love reading the parts between James and Audrey, especially when she calls him out on having dimples haha, because he has his moments when she can break past his tough guy routine, and get him to smile, and it's just plain awesome.

@ illyria

Oops! Meant to say "she," as in Audrey before her belly gets too big for her to move around fast. And yeah, I was thinking of dragging it out, but then I didn't want all of their interactions to be repetitive arguments.

Congratulations on your pregnancy.

I didn't expect Audrey to just confirm to James that the baby is his and not Daniel's, i actually thought that she was going to deny it for a while.
Loved the part where Audrey and Brittany are talking about baby names. I think Daniel is going to be so Angry with Audrey when he finds out and i do think he's going to turn on her for a while because after all she did sleep with his best friend. I also love that you showed us this sweet and caring side of Cory. When they were discussing if Audrey could join them on the run and Hector was talking, were you aware that he was referring to the baby as a he? or did you do that intentionally, i know talking about the baby as an it doesn't sound right either but now it seems like he's talking about a boy.

I am sooo happy for you! Its going to be so cool hearing about yours and Audrey's pregnancies at the same time. Congrats(:

Congratulations! It'll definitely help with making what Audrey's going through seem real. Awesome update, I'm just wondering if Daniel's going to find out what happened between her and James, hmmm... Can't wait to read the next update!

Ah! Congratulations! Half way reading the chapter I was like "It would be interesting if she's actually pregnant this entire time she's writing this story." That's so cool though, did you plan it like that or did it just happen? Lol!

Still loving this story!

Ahhhhhh mannnnn, I love how you ended Dead & Sick. It reminded me of how Bella Swan's storyline ended in the book for Breaking Dawn, then for the rest from a different point of view. I loved the approach. Instead of launching into the complications Audrey is facing two weeks later, you go with three other characters, and kinda let that story simmer and sink in, making it even more powerful when it moves back to the point of view of Audrey. I'm really excited to see where this series goes, the dramatic undercurrent is just amazing, and sometimes while reading it, it feels like you're watching a movie. (This would make, an AWESOME TV SERIES, BTW) Ughhhhh, this is such an amazing sequel already, and I'm excited to read what comes next. Excellent, excellent, amazing work!

I didn't expect you to post the first chapter for Bone & Marrow so soon, but hey i'm not complaining.
when i read the first part of the chapter i thought Mikey sounds familiar but i couldn't remember him, but then i read the name Rusty and Randall and i was like hey weren't they the triplets from the previous version. (i'm writing this comment and reading the chapter at the same time)

Yeah i was right they are the triplets but they just havent appeared yet. I just remembered them from the previous one that's why the sounded so familiar. To be completely honest i can't remember anything of them exept there names, but that is actually a good thing, now they're new to me too.

I agree with Randall Mikey is an Asshole.
Aww poor Parker i'm glad they found him so he isn't alone anymore.
What you killed Randall, that's so soon. I feel bad for Mikey and Rusty for losing their brother.

I LOVE this chapter, i'm glad they weren't already at the manor, now we got to know them a bit.
I haven't heared of the song before but reading it was very annoying so i was kinda biased, but i listened to it just now and it is better then i thought it would be.