January 22nd, 2016 at 02:51am
@ The Alpha's Angel
Thank you! I really struggle with description and agonized over this for so long. I'm happy you enjoy the conversation; those two characters don't banter much so I tried to keep it light. I really appreciate the sweet comment!
I never thought about it as an original fiction piece so I'm very glad it could translate over, staying realistic, and still tug at heartstrings.
I would definitely recommend the book and movie, as cheesy as they may seem now. The two brothers in the book aren't very close and its a source of tension- maybe even the catalyst for the entire story. I read the book in second grade so this story has been a part of my life for about 17 years. I really appreciate the lovely comment and recommendation.
I loved writing this piece and definitely agonized over it, so y'all's comments mean everything to me.