Ngipin - Comments

i need to stop reading creepy things @ 3AM. bc now im afraid of waking up like that & losing a tooth. like losing control, i feel confused, but in a good, thrilling sort of way. especially bc i feel like the effects of this girl's nightmare led to the tooth in her hand w/ blood everywhere.

& sheesh, that's the worst in itself bc I ALWAYS HAVE DREAMS OF MY PRETTY TEETH FALLING OUT SO WHAT DOES THIS MEAN? that im paranoid & you're goddamn talented

This story really confuses me

I know I say this every time I comment on one of your stories, but I really adore your descriptions. I know that exact feeling of waking up from a nightmare in a cold sweat and all panic-y and I think you described it perfectly. That’d be awful though, waking up from a nightmare and then finding a tooth hanging out in your hand with blood everywhere, my god.

I really liked the last sentence, I guess because I liked the way that you described the blood, but also because it’s super descriptive and then just ends with “a tooth” and nothing else.

But yes, like all of your other stories I’ve raved about, I adored this. Lovely job!