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  • RobinA7X

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    @ matthew sanders;
    Thank you! I will be updating sometime today or tomorrow :)
    April 23rd, 2016 at 05:17pm
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    I really like this!
    April 21st, 2016 at 12:31am
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    @RobinA7X
    Yay!!!! I can't wait!!
    March 22nd, 2016 at 03:58am
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    @ fienix66613
    thank you! i will have the next update out in a day or so :)
    March 21st, 2016 at 05:33am
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    Love it love it love it!!!!! Please update ASAP!!
    March 19th, 2016 at 03:47pm
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    Update Very Happy
    August 25th, 2015 at 09:44pm
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    @ mrsmshadz
    Lol its totally fine and he's 24, I'm working on a special chapter to change that scene though. Wink
    August 18th, 2015 at 11:00pm
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    I'm so. mad at myself for not realizing I hadn't subscribed to this story. Anyways, I'm loving it. Ugh, I just hope he doesn't fuck things up and be with Gena!! Also how old is zaky to still be living at home?? Can't wait for more!!
    August 18th, 2015 at 05:34pm
  • RobinA7X

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    @ vampire_sun
    Thanks doll I'll gladly keep you in the tagging loop , and no problem whenever you get a chance to read em let me know what you think Very Happy
    August 15th, 2015 at 10:18pm
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    @ RobinA7X
    I'm house-sitting and haven't had a chance to read the latest chapters b/c Internet is horrible here and it takes forever for a page to load, but I just wanted to say I appreciate you tagging me here when you update. My Mibba email isn't one I frequently check, so the notification is really helpful for me since I tend to just glance at the updated stories list and may miss it otherwise Very Happy
    August 15th, 2015 at 09:40pm
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    @ CallusedSilk
    I like to reply to people who comment because sometimes they don't receive them. But if it bothers you I'll make sure not to reply so you can just get only the update email. Again sorry if it's too much.
    August 15th, 2015 at 07:16am
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    Interesting chapter. Be careful about words like your vs you're. Easy way to remember is to just replace the word with 'you are' in your mind. If the sentence still makes sense then it's you're, but if it doesn't then use your.

    Also, as convenient as it is to just reply to everyone saying there's an update, it's actually not necessary. If someone has chosen to subscribe to your story then they already get an e-mail notification that you've updated. And even if that e-mail doesn't happen, they can just check the subscription list and see when you last posted. Replying means that someone could get potentially two e-mails, and a notification saying that you've updated, which might become bothersome to people.
    August 15th, 2015 at 04:13am
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    @ MsGates

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    update Smile
    August 15th, 2015 at 03:46am
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    update Smoke
    August 13th, 2015 at 12:15am
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    @ MsGates

    Thank you :)

    Well my friend who is in the marines sometimes goes aboard, so i sort of just used that as an idea. but thanks ill definitely ask :D
    August 12th, 2015 at 08:43pm
  • MsGates

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    Good start, I am confused as to why she is on a ship if she is in the Army. I like the idea and where you are heading. If you need any military help feel free to ask me (8 year usaf vet)

    Anywho subscribed and rec'd
    August 12th, 2015 at 08:00pm
  • vampire_sun

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    I just re-read the last chapter and it flows much better now.

    Poor Anna Sad Losing one parent is hard enough, I can't imagine what it would be like to lose both at the same time. I still haven't figured out what's going on in Z's head, other than possibly a fear of being alone, but I like that Matt's trying to steer him in the right direction. Maybe they'll be able to meet now that Anna will be back in the states and he'll realize he wants more with her. She's obviously going to need a shoulder to cry on, and someone to help keep her mind off the tragedy, and I can think of nobody better Wink
    August 11th, 2015 at 04:28am
  • RobinA7X

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    @ vampire_sun

    Thanks!

    And you're right, it didnt really make sense, so I'm going to fix up the chapter make it that he still lives at home for the time being

    Thanks for pointing that out! I'll fix it :)
    August 9th, 2015 at 06:51pm
  • vampire_sun

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    I'm loving how quickly you're getting these updates out!

    Clearly Gena is just hearing what she wants to hear. I hope Zacky doesn't let her force her way back into his life, though, since it seems like he isn't sure what he wants right now.

    Why is Zacky getting mail at his parents house if he also has his own place? Wouldn't he have given Anna his address, not his parents?

    1 grammatical thing: the last sentence of the first paragraph you have honestly twice. I'd get rid of one of them, it's a bit redundant to have them both there.
    August 9th, 2015 at 05:13pm
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    update :)
    August 9th, 2015 at 07:27am