March 3rd, 2016 at 09:07am
im not a fan of all the fancy colors because i have sensitive eyes, but i love what you're doing with this story on a first impression basis. two queens of alchemy— that is such a bad ass title. it's really interesting & i love that. mind you, i have full metal on my to-watch list, but i haven't gotten around to it yet so im excited to see what you've conjured. let me just go ahead & praise you for the summary because i for one think it's so hard to write them. i love getting a little insight as im learning the importance of one.
i love the personalities within these characters. they sound so real, relate-able (in a personal way) & are just freaking hilarious. though it's hard to read as im not apart of the fandom (NOT YET I MEAN), you still get a gist for the world that's being introduced. you write it so intricately & detailed that the reader has no choice but to grasp the situation @ hand. damn it...now i want to binge watch as much as i can.
good job on this!
I will probably work on the background once I have a working laptop again but I'm glad you enjoyed this even being outside of the fandom. That's impressive to say the very least. We love detail to say in the very least so summaries are always quite a bit of fun for us.