Harry Styles - Comments

  • louis tomlinson.

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    THE ENDING MADE ME LAUGH OUT LOUD THIS IS SO FUNNY
    November 20th, 2015 at 01:52am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I love this... I'm a fan of cliche (don't tell no one) and this was funny! You did this really well and it's just awesome. Stupid damn bike killing vibe!
    November 9th, 2015 at 06:48pm
  • losing control.

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    Oh my god, I love this cliché so much. I feel like I say that every time I read a story entered in the cliché contest BUT THEY’RE ALL SO GOOD.

    That first line is killer, comparing something to Twilight is always a solid way to start off a story.

    I enjoy the fact that Kerian is a stereotypical nerdy, lost girl and has the stereotypical thought process, it’s a fantastic touch. And then you have Harry who thinks everyone should know who he is. So great. And I like how even though I can tell you were emulating how the cliché stories are written, you still wrote it well and it all flowed together really nicely. I love how much thought you put into making it as cliché as possible.

    AND THEN THE BIKE KILLING THE VIBE OH MY GOD. I love this so much I can’t even handle it lmfao Fantastic job, lovely!
    October 17th, 2015 at 06:34am
  • n. josten

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    !!!! lmfao !!!!

    I legit just sat here and laughed for a good five minutes and I STILL HAVEN'T STOPPED. THE VIBE GOT KILLED.
    October 1st, 2015 at 09:50am