Loved this update! Glad you could get back down to one job it would me your life easier :) Omg that last bit of The chapter though!! Dam hehe can't wait for the next!
You do have a few typos, but I don't think it detracts from the story! My guess is, after you finish the story, you'll just need to go back through and do some editing.
That being said, I found your story today, and it has completely captivated me! I love the whole premise, and you have great descriptions and action. I have subscribed and hope that you will be able to continue on with updates more often now that summer is coming up!
By the way, I do like having the English translations within the text. It makes it easier than having to scroll up and down to find out what Roman is saying.
I'm in love with this story! It is so amazing I love the way you have made Roman so far when he speaks in Russian is so hot! ( I do like how you put what he is saying in English to,it makes it easy to understand). I wouldn't mind being one of the wolfs mates dam! Haha. I really like the way you write it really brings you into the story I couldn't stop reading and read it all at once, can't wait for your next update!!
Your welcome :)