The Science of Paper Airplanes - Comments

AWWWWWWEEEEEEEE.

I'm not sure what else to say. They're so adorable, and I'm sad about graduation now! Do they really have to?!

Okay.., I admit...I am hopelessly addicted to their relationship. The friends with cute flirting. His gentlemanly-ness. And Hiro showing up random. I know he didn't just go home! :)

I said I was going to comment last night, but I lied. Sorry! Still, This is a good chapter. I don't mind the conversations because the way they talk is so conversational. Plus I loved your ending quote for Tadashi to Hiro. "if it doesn't involve the words 'bot' or fight'..." :) With that one line I knew exactly how Hiro looked, and how kind of frustrated Tadashi was with him even though secretly he thinks bot fights are cool too.

I shouldn't start reading this! I've got so much going on, but I loved Baymax, and I can't find anything wrong with your writing, plus the pinky promise at the end made me smile. So I'm in. I'm subbing! And I can't wait to see where you go with this. It has potential.