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I cant wait for when he comes and tells her hes single and has ended things with tara, and that he wants to be with her and only her!!! Cant wait for more!!

Oh stop! He's so sweet! Lol <3

I really like the summary! I've never watched Sons of Anarchy, buuuttttt, I am a sap for biker stories, I dunno why, they're just different than a lot of other stories. Okay, back to the summary. I like it, it's short and sweet, and gives you an idea what you're in for, without giving away any of the plot.

I started reading late last night, and I kept pulling the 'just one more chapter' card haha, it's really well written, and I like the pace that the story moves. The entire time, it just keeps the reader in suspense, and makes them think "Are they going to hook up now?!" So when it finally happened in the last chapter, I war hooted, and might've woken up my family, but oh well, there was stuff happening!

I like how you describe the characters, as well, and accompanying them with a gif to give the reader, (Who like myself, may or may not be a fan of the show) an idea what they look like. I really like your writing style, as well, you're very good at writing! I subbed and rec'd, and am looking forward to future updates! Awesome work.

Summary:
I love your summary! It provides mystery and definitely makes me want to read on. I'm definitely excited to see where you take this!

Chapter One:
I absolutely loved the first chapter. Julie and Charlotte's relationship is adorable. The dialogue between all of them was so natural and amusing. Opie seems like a sweetheart, but I'm not too trusting of Jax just yet. I'm wondering what's really going on, honestly. I'm assuming Julie knows, being with Opie and all. Man, I'm so excited!

Chapter Two:
I like the little bit between Charlotte and Julie in the beginning. Julie getting defensive about the Sons of Anarchy and everything. It was interesting to see and I'm hoping Charlotte doesn't get too mad when she finally figures out the truth (which I'm assuming will happen).
I liked everything between Charlotte and Jax. You get to find out more about Charlotte and find out a little more about Jax which was greatly appreciated.

Chapter Three:
Oh, no. I can understand why Julie was so pissed off. Seeing her younger sister like that must have really freaked her out, but her sister is her own person. I'm curious to know what kind of trouble is behind Jax though.
I'm also wondering what will happen if Charlotte and Jax do end up having sex. I'm sure Opie and Julie would find out and I'm worried about the outcome.

I'm going to stop the comment here, but I'm definitely going to keep reading. This is an awesome story and I think the short chapters make this all the better. I did notice a few errors, but nothing too major. The flow of the story is wonderful and I'm really loving what you've got so far. Well done!

I love that you included an actual summary!

Chapter 1: The first chapter was a nice intro to the story. I like that it looks like Charlie is getting a fresh start in Charming and we'll be learning about her and life in Charming at the same time.

* I hope the image at the bottom isn't how Jackson was looking at Charlie!

Chapter 2: I think the second chapter did a great job of officially introducing Jackson and Charlie. I like that, so far, their relationship seems to be developing like a normal one - just two people getting to know each other without too much club drama. I think it'll be interesting if Charlie gets to know Jackson outside of the club and then to see how she reacts to his club life.

Chapter 3: Oh, Julie, you hypocrite - you're dating Opie (a SOA) but you don't want your sister involved with Jackson. XD I do understand it though. I think it makes sense for Julie, the big sister, to be protective of her little sister - especially since it looks like in some ways Charlie may have lived a little more sheltered than Julie did.

I think the shortness of the chapters works well here. It makes it easy to keep reading.

The other chapters I kept reading straight through until the most recent chapter. I must admit, I was disappointed to find that Jax is putting moves on Charlie while he's still with Tara. It's driving me crazy that you introduced Tara into the story and then we never see her again! But I guess that's coming in later.

So far I like this story. I'm definitely interested in seeing what's coming next.

Alright, I know literally nothing about Sons of Anarchy, but here we go

I've only read the first chapter so far, but I really appreciate how easy it is to read this story. Everything flows together really well, and even though I don't know anything about the show, I didn't feel like I was missing anything while I reading. If that makes sense.

The relationships between the your characters felt really authentic as well, nothing felt forced with the dialogue between any of them which was really nice. I feel like something is going to happen between Charlotte and Jax which is exciting~

Overall, I really enjoyed the beginning of this and I look forward to reading more!

Yes they kissed! Looking forward to more

@ cobra bubbles;
That smirk..

@ CrystalBlueDisguise
Ahh, I fixed it. Hope you enjoy this dose of Jax

Ahhh shit. Tara is gonna freak...
Btw, your gif at the bottom didn't work

I adore this. I love how you capture just how mysterious Jax is, but yet you show his soft side. Pleeease update soon <3

Update asap please!! I love this story

Update asap please!! I love this story

Great story. Please write more

so glad your back!!!!

love love love this! please update again soon!

I love it!!! Protective/aggressive Jax is always a plus!!!

@ miss-cavill-teller Thank you so much haha. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Also i love any interaction of Daddy Jax!! Abel is honestly adorable!!!

@xoxoBree yes he is!!! Him and Juice!! Opie is like that teddy bear you wanna cuddle when youve had a bad day. but Jax is like the bad boy that makes everyone see him as tough and scary, but comes home and just cuddles infront of the tv while you read or watch a movie, playing with his hair. Sorry I just have a wild imagination! And I love your writing!!

Seriously keep up the great writing!