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  • Leaving Memories

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    And I will always continue my love to this story! Ugh, that last line killed me, because that's it. I just want to see them happy together and be a cute lovey dovey couple and have a happily ever after. But, I also love how she brushes him off casually but then he's still likes her. Why does love have to be so hard? But I wouldn't have your story any other way.
    February 6th, 2016 at 05:39am
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    Ugh, I just want them to be happy together. I'm so in love with the story and just - there's no words that can describe how much I want to keep reading, but I can't because you haven't updated you.
    Anywho, I'm glad you felt well enough to update and I can't wait for the next update!
    February 4th, 2016 at 03:38am
  • JJ Everlasting;

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    UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I finally caught up! It's such a good story and I can't wait for it to continue! By the way, the review will be up on the 4th of February so keep an eye out for it!

    Alright, so another quick thing, I actually cried when you mentioned Daniel. There was a guy I saw at work the other day and he looked exactly like Daniel, ontop of that I've been watching Cyndago a lot lately, and this just pushed me over. In a good way I guess, it just shows how much he is missed.

    Anyway, keep up the good writing hun.

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    ~Sam
    January 31st, 2016 at 12:08am
  • Leaving Memories

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    You brought up Daniel and my feels button was hit. But I like how you incorporate some of his actual life into your story, it makes it seem more real. I continue to fall in love with your story chapter by chapter, and once again I can't wait for an update.
    January 23rd, 2016 at 06:35am
  • saegusa.

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    is this. could this be. a really-well written markiplier fanfiction. oh my lordy-loo, why, i think i'm in love. In Love

    your descriptions are on point. i feel like i'm being injected into the scene, from the moment mark meets her to their conversation at his place (CHICA!! SWEET LIL CHICA!!) to the end result of jaime and this nasty-ass joker and everything inbetween. this is amazing, and i absolutely adore the stark contrast between mark and joker. he's so obviously a better person, higher in personality and morals and everything, but jaime still has to go back to the trash, if only just to keep herself (and, by extension, mark) out of (nastier) trouble. not only is it realistic, it aches because you just want nothing more than jaime to get better...like mark. lmfao

    the way jaime and joker ended, however, is awful. poor baby. Cry HEY DID MARK JUST OPEN UP HIS HOME TO YOU JAIME HEY JAIME DO YOU WANNA STAY WITH MARK I KNOW YOU DO HEY JAIME YOU WANT BETTER LET'S GET BETTER. OMGYES bless the sweet heart that is mark.

    "I straightened my posture and stomped my foot softly against the linoleum floor, “In fact, I won’t take no for an answer.” oh my goodness, that's so him. he stomped his foot!! what a little boy. tehe

    i absolutely adore this! i can't wait for more!
    January 18th, 2016 at 11:23pm
  • Leaving Memories

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    So glad you updated and I love it! I'm glad she left Joker, but sad he was a dick about it. She deserves better and maybe Mark can be that for her! Can't wait for the next update!
    January 17th, 2016 at 07:33pm
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    This is still uncontrollably adorable. I love the Joker/Harley Quinn reference; however I'm not sure how I feel about that duo. I can't wait for the next update!
    January 13th, 2016 at 07:05pm
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    I find this completely adorable and I'm in love with it. I can't wait for the next update.
    January 8th, 2016 at 05:03am
  • JJ Everlasting;

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    Oh my lord. I love this so much! Then again, I love anything with Markiplier. This though, this is a seriously good story. I can't wait for you to keep updating.
    January 6th, 2016 at 12:30am