A Comfortable Silence - Comments

  • Adribarakarth

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    @ americancandy.
    Yeah, of course! It was the first time I did that kind of thing so I didn't relaly know how to do it but I think I'll take that into account, thanks (: x
    November 3rd, 2015 at 08:12pm
  • fifthghost

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    @ Adribarakarth
    Ah, I get it. You can warp prompts to make them easier to write for you though; draw your own inspiration if you struggle to follow it exactly!
    November 3rd, 2015 at 01:54pm
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    @ americancandy.
    Hi! Yeah, it was kinda complicated because I wanted to follow the directions of the one who wrote the prompt so that's why I prove in first person haha.
    October 30th, 2015 at 01:59pm
  • fifthghost

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    I'm also not a fan of the switching POV, I think you might've been better off with third person for that, but this was good! I love when people write those prompts.
    October 30th, 2015 at 12:11pm
  • Adribarakarth

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    @ HardlyxHappy
    The person who suggested this prompt was talking in first person so I thought I would follow along haha. I'm glad you still like it and thanks for the feedback, it means a lot (: x
    October 29th, 2015 at 09:18am
  • OverbearingStruggles

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    I'm not huge on 1st person POV, but this was absolutely adorable. I love their awkwardness when first being in the hall.
    October 29th, 2015 at 06:16am