Oh my God. I'M SO CONFUSED, I LIKE THEM BOTH WHATS HAPPENING I'M NOT EVEN A FAN OF THE PREDATORS (although they are one of the teams I will be cheering for)!! I'm so sad though, I legit teared up in the first, second and third chapter. You made a grown man cry, and I'm a sucker for guys crying! ...but... did James cheat on her during those 3 weeks of not talking to her? Because if he did, then I'm on Shea's side. I'm not a fan of cheating in stories, nor am I fan of angst, but damn it. I couldn't help but continue to read this story.
I love what you have so far. The previous chapter was absolutely adorable with the 'zombies'. I love Emma, and I love Charlie, James (because idk if he cheated yet or not) and Shea! You def got something good going on here, and I hope you continue with it.