Hiraeth - Comments

WHEN I SAW AN UPDATE, I FLIPPED

I love how Rhys was described as a mature sophomore I found that way more funnier than I should because the smores at my old high school were crazy

BOYS THAT SMELLED LIKE STALE CHIPS

Yeah yo Harry is here or not. It's frustrating like, Harry just stay

You somehow capture my real character and I love that about you and your writing! I had braces at 13……...and it were off in high school

Oh who is Harry’s damn mystery buddy?!? WAIT
AM I THAT BUDDY FR THE FUTURE
IS HARRY JUST TIME TRAVELING BACK TO MY CHILDHOOD OR SOMETHING
BC HE’S A DAMN TRAVELER AND SHIT
HQISOKDWKKSKW my theory stands

Harry tell me the truth, yo

And Rhys seems interesting. He's a bad boy, private school boy and I love it

His boots

Harry, why so protective?!?! he knows something, doesn't he?!

HARRY.

RHYS.
What a butt
SHHKIOUVJUG

Uggggghh Harry Styles is usually right
WHY DIDN'T I LISTEN
rhys is horrible and mean and not worthy
HE KISSED THE CHEEK AND THAT WAS THAT?!?!? I need more

Wally is so adorable

WAIT WHAT IF THERE’S SOMETHING WRONG W ME
and Harry is just my hallucination
Omgomgomgomg nooooo

HIGH SCHOOL SAM LOL.

I have a question! Did Harry age as I did through the years? Or did he stay the same age?

I love how you bring all these details and thoughts into my character! I notice Sam in the story analyzes a lot, something I do in real life! I like that little touch in the character.

The LA summer thing reminded me of scenes from Gossip Girl when they'd be on summer break and stuff

harry, pick me, choose me, love me

@ 8 year old me with those tattoos

SHIT
did u really make that happen
Damn
That was so sudden

Claps to me for being confident enough to go on Harry BUT STILL LOL. SO SOON

WHAT’S GOING ON
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW
SAM WHY’D U DO THAT LOL

HARRY TELL ME THE TRUTH ABOUT YOU, YOUR TIME TRAVELING, AND YOUR PURPOSE

aw the whole neck/head thing fitting together

Cat socks/pajamas yeah I own those too

I'm always attracted to the bad boy type
ugh screw u Royce

HOW’S LOVERBOY
HAHAHAHHA HARRY, NOT NOW

garrett better be good
Idk anymore

BUT BRAH, BE GENTLE OKAY GARRETT
OH NO HE DIDN’T
THAT BOY WJJAJAJAJA SCREW HIM

I have so many mixed emotions because of Harry
always there when I'm in trouble
Never there when I want him to be
Harry Styles, you confusing boy

NEW YORK IS LOVELY
and I love how you made this my hometown

That rain part in the story made my heart drop AWWWW

WAIT WHAT.
HE
WHAT
FINALLY
HARRY STYLES KISSED ME
F-I-N-A-L-L-Y

THANK U, ABBIE AGAIN! I can't wait for part 3

I’m letting you know now that I was so excited to read this

I love how you mentioned the memory of the beach (since I live in Hawaii) and the little details that you used to described me. I'm generally a shy person and I see myself as a “not popular” person and you somehow captured that characteristic of me!

I've always wanted a pet

HOW DOES HE KNOW MY DOG’S NAME?????! Harry, come back. I love how he's described as as lanky HAHAHA

Wait but how does he know my name …….what even Harry Styles

I honestly love the descriptions and the nice flow in your writing. I noticed all your stories are like this!

Holy crap am I going crazy ?!?!?! *singing* baby come back!

Ahhhhhh CD players and Britney those were the days. It's amazing how well written this is! I'm here reading like this is a novel, adoring your writing. All that's going through my head is, “Goddamn Harry, state your purpose here!” It's making me go as crazy as the Sam in the story

Did I really take a candy from a stranger???? That's so interesting because in a way, Sam in the story does find Harry rather familiar and trustworthy even though she's second guessing herself. Harry, you confusing, good looking person

He's a time traveler?

Harry Styles is a time traveler

Can we just talk about that for a second?? I mean, this could be my fangirl coming out but damn, imagine this British boy acting like he's Marty McFly from Back to the Future, all perfect and shit dude, Harry

Holy wow Harry just gave all that information away about the pregnancy like that's a lot of information to lay on a person so suddenly. But I could somehow imagine him acting like this

Wait, why do I keep taking his candies?????
Stop making me take his goodies

So he was right about the pregnancy and he keeps giving me candy Harryyyyyyy, why are you so mysterious?????

My grandma reads everything out loud too haha. I thought that was a nice touch of detail.

I've always wanted to experience New Year's Eve in New York! I bet Harry will be here somehow……...yeah I'm right (5 months really?!)

AGAIN WITH THE BOOTS HAHAHAHHA. I could see myself making that comment urggghhh, harry is so cute bringing the shell.

There he is with his candy again! I love this detail about him for some reason. The more he did it throughout the chapter, I thought it was a nice touch to his character. It’s like a gateway for Sam (me) to continue talking to him. Idk, it’s interesting.

wait, who’s the other girl

He went full on serious mode towards the end about his vacation and I love it. I love him. AHAH. But really, I want to know his purpose with all these pop-ups

I honestly couldn’t help but smile throughout reading the entire thing You honestly did so well, I could imagine myself in the scenarios you described perfectly. Your writing is the type of writing people would kill to have. It was as if you wrote this with one eye closed, breezing through it so nicely. Thank you! I can’t wait for the next one

I'm so e-x-c-i-t-e-d