Secret Identity - Comments

  • SoberKitty

    SoberKitty (100)

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    Saw your rec, decided to swing by and read some stuff. :)

    So far I guess I think it's a bit confusing. I mean why does she want to be at school so badly? Is there a reason her mom didn't cry or anything considering she's off to boarding school? That kind of thing. Other than that I'd say the idea is as interesting as comedy can get, pretending to be a boy is a pretty major undertaking. Leaves you many avenues to explore and plenty of opportunities to earn a giggle from your readers. Kind of reminds me of 'She's the Man', to be honest haha
    January 13th, 2016 at 07:34am