Unravel - Comments

I really enjoyed reading this!! I can't wait for more updates.

Ive really enjoyed reading this so far. Cant wait for the next chapter :)

Badass and yummy. I love it.

okay I just adored that chapter.. first the weird way he takes his cereal, milk first??
and then the two just being cute, sitting there talking... Bucky giving her his shirt.....
The hug and then they FINALLY KISSED!! Whooop!!

heheh Clint is a little shit
and Liz is stubborn as hell
Bucky is still adorable
hah, if I were Bucky I wouldn't be so sure about Sam either, considering everything

Such a sweet chapter. It's nice to get a bit of backstory for Liz.

i'm just sitting here reading this chapter with a big goofy smile on my face- and wanting to cuddle something..

That is a good question. Why DIDN'T she join S.H.I.E.L.D?

And Clint telling her to stop moving, haha. She was ready to bite his head off.

Great chapter!

Was she really that desperate to explain another one’s feelings by comparing him to ducks?
I just love those little funny bits you come up with

Hah! Clint, stop telling her to stop moving
Awe.. Bucky didn't enjoy watching her in pain..
Hmm.. I wanna know the answer to Steve's question now though, why didn't she join S.H.I.E.L.D??

'Like the 90 year old you are...' That had me rolling. I'm glad Liz is okay! Shot to the thigh... ugh, that has to hurt. Thank god it didn't hit an artery, because if it had... I won't go there.

But yeah for Bucky coming to the rescue! I love how he tries not to let on that he really cares about her and Steve sees right through it. Great chapter!

LOVE LOVE LOVE!! addicted now!

LOVE LOVE LOVE!! addicted now!

Hah, okay so this time i'll try and stick with just one comment, alright?

shot in the thigh, PHEW! But still ouch!! I bet that hurts like a bitch, imagine that it hurts like a bitch no matter where you're shot... don't want to find out though

Awwee!! BucketyBuck to the rescue (for some reason I wanna put a Q in that word..)

Steve.... He's adorable trying to get Bucky to confess that he cares about her more than he lets on..
"It doesn't matter.." of course it does you little fool! (adorable and totally hot but still a fool)

....like the 90 year old that you are...
Look who's talking Steve!!

Anyway.. I loved that chapter... can you tell??

Totally addicted!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Love me some drama! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh no! Liz! Gosh, such a great cliffhanger. This will be driving me nuts until the next update. Bucky is gonna be pissed when he finds out she's been shot.

Great chapter! I look forward to more!

uhm, had to go back and check on something... there wasn't anyone shouting Hey, just screaming and gun shots.. sorry my bad, been reading too many things at the same time so I mix them up (and sorry for 3 comments on the same chapter )

Buckt?? hahahah yeeaah.. I need to read though my things before I submit......

a snail on your hand?? alriiiight then...

eeek!! what the hell??! first they shock her, and then they were supposed to kind of just leave her there? waiting for Buckt I suppose? or something like that.. But someone (don't think it would've been Bucky, he wouldn't have shouted Hey, before attacking those men) came to help her, which just ended with one of them pulling his gun on her instead
WAY TO GO WHOEVER YOU ARE!!
if it wasn't Bucky- gosh I hope he wouldn't be so dumb to shout at them first- (haha) I bet that he'll be a little bit pissed off when he finds out that she was shot........

Ugh, poor Liz. She's having a rough time. I really hope James shows up again soon, to keep her company since she doesn't have Vito. And I really hope he's okay!