January 26th, 2016 at 02:57am
I am so glad I found this story. It's absolutely amazing! I love the way you write, there's something captivating about your writing style that drew me into Blue's world and now I want to stay there too. You gave me enough information as a reader to understand the setting, but not too much so it doesn't give away the whole plot. I love the uniqueness of the world as well! I've never read something like this before and it was a wonderful read.
Blue is a lovely character as well, I already love him and Ellis is definitely someone I know I'm going to love even more as the story progresses. TLDR: Fantastic story! Please continue, I haven't read anything that captivated me this much for a long time.
Sorry, I just got around to reading your very encouraging and kind comment! Thank you so much, and I hope you keep reading. :)
-Quinn