Their eyes kind of like like little blackish blue marbles that small but I've seen kids whose eyes changed within a few weeks so it's not to far off... Who knows? It's probably happened... Loved all three sections of this btw
Zooming is better than a five year wait between updates. Is Marley ever going to fully realize that Diane and Gazarra are family and not feel guilty about them doing stuff for her??
This is gold. I want to take a picture of this moment and frame it. Not a small frame, this moment needs on of those huge family portrait setups that takes up way too much. So happy.
Uncomfortable? Very...but I don't feel like you made light of it ugh the rest of what I to say is spoiler-y. You're cool, it's not like you made a joke of it - which would be very uncool. I think it's good that you showed what happens when people like your friend and Marley's mother do what they did.
Just finished reading all three of these again. I love them as much as the first time. :) Except, now I don't know what to do with myself until you update again, lol. Hope you update again soon! :D
School has been so crazy this semester for me and I completely forgot about this story until today. So I re-read the entire thing and I love it! I love who Marley is becoming and that she reached out to her mom for Avery's sake. Can't wait for another update!