May 25th, 2017 at 04:44am
I wasn't exactly sure what I should expect when I first clicked on this story, but I wasn't disappointed that's for sure. It was beautiful written and it flows really well. I like that it isn't cliché, and how easy it was to get hooked to the point of needing to know what was going to happen next. And what I really loved was that I felt like I could feel the MC's emotions and like I was watching the story unfold with every chapter, so as I read it would play out like a movie in my head.
I can't wait for this to be updated so I can read some more and see whatever you have planned to unfold! :)
I feel like this is so relatable on the level we've all had that one person we want to forget but cant, that always plague our thoughts even when we don't want them to. Its simple and sweet and to the point, without an excess of details that leaves us overwhelmed.