April 15th, 2019 at 04:51pm
I Have Died Every Day Waiting for You - Comments
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editApril 15th, 2019 at 04:51pm
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Oh my god. This was truly beautiful. It was hard to read for obvious reasons, but the ending made it all worth it.
I like how you made it realistic, how not every couple has an "easy" family timeline. I think that pairing it with mpreg made it that much more poignant.
Jack's pain for losing their first baby, wow. That had to be my favourite part, because of course you would assume that the one who loses the baby would be hurting more, I mean, they were the one who carried it, and you don't really take the other person's feelings into account -- but you made sure to include Jack and his feelings 100%. Even if Alex was selfish (which was a nice touch to have it through his eyes, to block the reader from Jack, much like Alex was doing).April 15th, 2019 at 11:26am -
@ jules391
That's freaking good news! Thank-you.August 5th, 2016 at 08:58pm -
This is freaking fantasticAugust 5th, 2016 at 06:41am
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@ kickthepj
This made me SO HAPPY, I can't even tell you. I love you, my precious little angel.July 28th, 2016 at 10:59pm -
eve..... my darling............ light of my life............ this was so good and I feel inadequate trying to come up with the right words to describe how I feel about this to you bc this is so well written and this comment is like ??1?1? help??!1 anyway I did really love this and the dialogue was so just spot on, you know when someone says one of those one-liners and instantly your heart drops to your stomach bc you feel what they're feeling instantly? yes, that happened, all the way. I will cherish your writing forever and also maybe cry about this a little more while I'm still here. love u (and this) lots <33333July 28th, 2016 at 09:19pm
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@ Jalexistheunicorn
Thank-you! ;___;July 19th, 2016 at 06:55pm -
@ stargirlpdf
omg I hope you're okay.July 19th, 2016 at 06:55pm -
@ PrincessMerrick
I really am a sucker for a happy ending, I always get so sad when I write endings that aren't entirely resolved. Thank-you for reading!!July 19th, 2016 at 06:54pm -
@ Forever Young.
Thank-you, love! I couldn't not end it happy, I probably would have broke my own heart if I didn't give them their baby. I'm actually kinda headcanoning them accidentally falling pregnant another couple of years down the line and successfully having a baby boy.July 19th, 2016 at 06:54pm -
beautifulJuly 19th, 2016 at 02:41pm
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I'm in tears what to fuckJuly 18th, 2016 at 04:51am
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God I loved this so much, I'm so glad you went for a happy ending :DJuly 17th, 2016 at 06:44pm
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Ahhh this made me feel so many things but it was so so so good and I'm so glad it ended happy :)July 17th, 2016 at 05:34am
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@ northshore
I would say sorry but truthfully I'm really happy to hear that!July 15th, 2016 at 10:35pm -
@ cinderblock.garden
I'm so glad!July 15th, 2016 at 10:35pm -
I'm sobbingJuly 15th, 2016 at 05:18pm
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Omg I love this wowwwJuly 15th, 2016 at 05:57am
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@ kennedybrock
This comment is gonna make me cry tbh dammit girl, thank-you. <3July 15th, 2016 at 01:10am
Thank-you so much!!! I’m so glad their growth as a couple translated with Alex coming to realise Jack was struggling with it just as much. I still really love this story so I’m glad you enjoyed it!