Waste His Time - Comments

  • kaul hilo

    kaul hilo (100)

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    This looks like it's going to be hilarious, or rather I know that it's going to be hilarious. The summary doesn't hook me in, but it doesn't need to. It's simple and to the point, letting the reader know what to expect and they can decide from there whether they want to keep reading and I know I definitely do. If I'm going to picky, I'm not a fan of the tiny chapter title link, but otherwise I like the layout and summary section a lot.

    Chapter One

    The way that this story is narrated is just perfect for the tone you set - it's funny, it's simple but it's actually really engaging. It's so personal, but in such a humorous read that I genuinely enjoy reading it. I also like that the narration is absolutely honest, I can see that you're being honest with who you are and the way you talk about Tinder and about boys is actually brutally honest, which makes everything even funnier, in my opinion. I absolutely loved the opening paragraph and then the following line, it gives us exposition into Alex's life and leads us nicely into the current situation.

    It's also fun for those fuckboys who think that by asking 'dtf?' is going to make you want to dtf. Fun fact: it's not. lmfao

    God, the slight history between Tacky and Alex is hilarious, the fact he will just not let it go makes it so much funnier but in a way it kind of makes me despair because he's a prime example of the kinds of boys that are unfortunately out there. I think the bluntness of the narration makes this whole thing so much better - it just absolutely fits with this kind of story and I wouldn't really have this any other way.

    The whole time Alex plots against him, I'm just there like: destroy this guy lmfao I'm actually anticipating what the hell she is thinking of doing to Tacky, I basically can't wait for her to get this kind of semi-revenge on him because honestly kudos for putting up with someone like that for as long as you did (even if it was only like a few days, a few days is still too much time to be spending talking to boys like Tacky). I, too, am behind the movement waste his time so let's see.

    Giving him her friend's ex's number was just perfect lmfao I feel like people should do this to all the fuckboys they come across because it honestly is the perfect plan and hopefully they'd get the message after something like that because if they don't then WELL. WELL.

    The ending lmfao It's like we have come full circle, it was so satisfying to see that the plan had worked, and to see Tacky leaving the hotel at the end meaning that he completely fell for it because boys, amirite!! God, what an excellent entry for my contest.

    Overall

    This was narrated absolutely perfectly. I loved how blunt, honest and to the point of it, while retaining that humour that is just my kind of humour. I thought that it was paced super well and I genuinely did really enjoy reading it. I want to hear more about your Tinder adventures because lmfao Other than me nit-picking the layout slightly, I don't think I have any other criticisms, I basically just loved it. Fantastic entry!
    July 27th, 2016 at 10:02pm
  • the dalliance.

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    lmfao
    THIS IS THE BEST. Clap
    March 20th, 2016 at 04:58am
  • swell

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    THANK YOU Cute
    February 3rd, 2016 at 05:57am
  • Alsoldey

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    GORL! I AM SO EXCITED!
    February 3rd, 2016 at 04:36am
  • raja sahara

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    this is already the best thing ever
    long live #wastehistime
    OMGYES
    February 3rd, 2016 at 04:25am
  • dawn of light

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    Dude, the summary and layout look so sick Wow
    February 3rd, 2016 at 03:27am