June 2nd, 2017 at 12:51am
Here to comment as a prize goodie for the Phobias Contest
This is a great drabble. In short words you managed to convey a powerful message about love in a poetic manner. I love the sense of imagery you used to describe with details, how this person feels towards another human being, by seeing, smelling, touching, listening and tasting him in a lustful and lovely way. I agree with the previous commentators, because it shows the significance of the narrators lust and love. The layout is delicate and beautiful.
It was written very well. I enjoyed reading it.
Great job!
I honestly really like just how much this drabble speaks to the reader without being made redundant by too many words. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.