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  • Kweenkk

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    great book!
    February 12th, 2018 at 11:52pm
  • coralreefs;

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    O...mg. I love this.
    February 26th, 2016 at 09:17pm
  • aubs

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    If Trinity's mother is telling her to leave the guy, then there is something seriously wrong with him. I mean, I know she doesn't need to be with him since he wants her to change into something that she's not, and makes her so insecure that she changes for him; she needs to leave and be with someone who loves everything about her and all that she is. It just makes me sad that she believes that he does love her when it's so obvious that he doesn't; I mean, maybe he does, but if he wants her to change so much, then he basically only loves the person that he wants her to be, if that makes any sense.

    This really hits home with a lot of people, including me. I mean, my boyfriend isn't like Trevor, thankfully, but I'm so insecure about my body when I know I shouldn't be. You've done a wonderful job with this so far and I can't wait to see what happens in future chapters.
    February 23rd, 2016 at 08:06pm
  • lost em.

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    I really love the layout. Gray is such a lovely color, honestly. She is pretty and he is rather hot tehe

    Trinity frown at herself
    ^ frowned

    B-Cup she'd
    ^Just a suggestion, but I feel like there should be a period after B-Cup and then she'd should be capitalized

    God, I really feel this piece. So many girls people begin to hate themselves. And it's usually after they start dating that it increases. It's... sad. And a Capricorn was the perfect sign for this story. It reminds me of my mother and her own insecurities with my step-dad.

    Very well written Clap
    February 23rd, 2016 at 02:59pm