April 29th, 2016 at 07:40am
Don't get me started with your layout. It's beautiful and everything about it just matches. I love the border pattern! Your summary definitely catches the reader's attention! This line, “but even with his claws wrapped tightly around his dictatorship, the world is slowly descending into chaos,” makes us wonder about the possible plot directions you'll take us in. Ugh this was also worded so nicely.
You already know how much I love your scenery skills and the way you word things so this will be me fangirling over your work once again
I really liked the flow you're setting out as a foundation to your story. I really liked how you described the corruption of the year and place because that lets our main Wolfe man come into play. Can I just say how great his role is?! He's as vain as his character is such tales but the direction you're taking him is soooo unique. I definitely liked the separation of groups. I'm wondering why normal life was separated from Wolfe’s life itself~ we’ll find out soon for sure
I have to say that Cerise’s role will be filled with chaos and surprise. I can't wait to see how she defeats Wolfe!
what if she falls for him
what if she's attracted to the bad boy type ooooh
WHAT A GREAT START, LIZZ!
Your entry deserves to be placed
Also I adore your layout!